One of my prime motivations for writing The Scorpian
Visitant was to create a fantasy novel in which the protagonists were neither
completely good nor irredeemably bad. Clearly, there is a starting point for
the main characters of Robbie and Louise and naturally both change as they
journey through the narrative. I'd like to share the development of these and
other characters in a series of blog posts.
Robbie begins as a complex synthesis of psychosis and
paranoia. He is an immature seventeen year old whose obsession is causing fires
and explosions on the chemical dumps of Maldervale. He does this at
considerable risk to himself, since he comes from a respectable working class
background and is employed as an apprentice fitter (mechanic) in one of the many
chemical factories in the town. His worry about getting caught induces a
suspicious mistrust of others, which is often unjustified. However, all worries
go out the window in the critical moments of fire-starting...
He fumbled in his pocket for his
matches. He opened the box upside down and several fell out to lie scattered on
the wooden floor of the gallery. Steady son. His hands were shaking terribly.
He picked out a match and struck it. Damn thing was damp and left a red trail
on the sandpaper. The phosphorous head was through to the wood. No good, he
dashed it down. The second match spluttered halfway along the rough strip. Then
it flared, and he held the stalk downwards in cupped hands, so that the flame
climbed the little splinter of wood, broadening as it came.
Robbie grinned, as he always
did, at the golden light warming his curved palms - the Power and the Glory. He
had to let it out. His head was wringing wet with sweat. He knelt and offered
freedom to his little flame. One by one, the yellow stalks caught, smoked,
blackened, shrivelled, went out. But just as the flame in his hand was dying,
one hollow stalk snatched it like an Olympian and carried it into the dry
harvest. At the crisis, Robbie could not care less whether he lived or died.
Everything outside the precious little bundle of flames sharpening his pupils
was obliterated by a blackness in which nothing mattered. He felt a great yell
building towards the point of no return, when the flames would assume a life
beyond his control. That moment was coming fast as the fire went deeper in, while
a slow but increasing emission of grey smoke and flammable combustion gases rose
to gather between hay and roof.
Suddenly the hot gases flashed
and the inferno erupted. Robbie did not cry out, but stood teetering in glory
upon the edge of the loft. The whole damn lot burned and he loved it - the
crackling, the heat, and the firelights dancing about his head like golden
phantoms. The flames mounted higher and higher to lash the rafters, and then a
surge of air rushed through his hair as a halo appeared in the roof to let out
the tide of smoke. It was impossible to leave it. But someone was shouting
outside. Some bloody rotten busybody in the street had seen smoke billowing
from the roof and was bawling the place down, curse them. It was always this
way. Robbie stumbled along the edge of the loft to the ladder, and then slid
down the stiles. At the big exit, he gave the bright roaring galleries one last
hopeless look. Then he was gone.
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