Here's an excerpt from Gloria's first scene in the book. Available for free sampling at Smashwords:
Gloria Digbone was in her study
high in the west wall of the keep of Sanintowne
Castle . Still dressed for
the field in belted green tunic and riding breeches, she sat motionless, a
small neat figure, almost lost behind her great wide desk. She had short,
boyish red hair and, though rising forty, her small fine features still made up
a very pretty face. The problem she’d set out on the single page that occupied
her desk could find no ready solution in her mind. She got up, opened the
leaded window behind her chair, and looked out over the Sanin estuary while
continuing to mull things over. Under plucked brows, her eyes were deepest
brown, and gaze calm and flat. It was a look that she’d cultivated over the
years of power, so that even her closest advisors found her inner workings
quite inscrutable.
Gloria never tired of the sight
of the river. Beyond the sandstone curtain wall, the steely waters lapped the
jutting promontory upon which her fortress was built. The estuary glittered in
the verdant arms of quiet pastures and, where the tides never reached, there
were golden beaches upon which the white hulls of fishing boats rested under a
leaning thicket of masts. If only momentarily, it made her feel so fortunate
that her father had installed her here in the Castle as the ruler of Mizar. It
had been sixteen years since he had seized power after returning from the much
bigger neighbouring land to the east, the Iron Realm of Izar. After
establishing her as Mistress, her father had set out for the strange new world
he frequented. On this occasion, he took with him her baby half-sister with whose
care Gloria had been charged, all too briefly, during his visit to the Iron
Realm.
Her father, no man greater in
sorcery, nor in guile or craft, obsessed as he was with the innovations of this
strange new world, of course, had returned often in those first couple of years
to instruct her and the state’s artisans and builders in those newly discovered
ways. Each time he would stay for several weeks to launch certain carefully
chosen projects, be they military or civil, all ultimately designed to intensify
the grip of Gloria’s regime. But her father’s visits all too soon became less
frequent, and now there had been neither sight nor sign of him for nigh on
fourteen years.
In his extended absence, a
rebellion had stirred in the Seven Towns in the east of the land. At first,
Gloria had believed that the people there had grown jealous, largely deprived
of many of the good things installed in the towns and villages of the west. But
no promises or attempts to mollify them had proved to be successful. She had
begun to accept that they were driven by a hatred that could not be assuaged by
improvement of their lot. Historically, they looked eastwards to Izar. During
the centuries in which Mizar (or Izar Minor) had been a protectorate of the
Iron Realm, they had enjoyed favour and privilege among the whole populace.
That had changed with her rule, triggered by a blinding spell flashed from her
father’s fingertips. Gloria allowed herself a small, if malicious, smile at
thoughts of a mad Izarian King left impotent within the seat of his former
power, the rigid system of featly to him binding his lords to new policies
whispered from behind the throne. Central among these decrees was that of
non-intervention in the affairs of Mizar.
As a consequence, all the
present internal difficulties could be settled by the application of brute
force. But Captain Starr had raided the east last summer, being stopped by the
rebels on the outskirts of the first major town, Acamar. On the way, atrocities
perpetrated throughout the valley of the Eridanus River
in the name of order and enlightenment had only intensified opposition. Long
and messy oppression would only further galvanise the rebels’ hatred. A short
and decisive battle to annihilate their means to resist would serve better to
bring them to their senses. Guns and powder would do it. Starr could draw them
out their Seven Towns with one final, albeit reluctantly sanctioned, campaign
of brutality on the surrounding rural areas. Yet, though she had enough
gunpowder to deal with the insurgents, the legacy of her father’s actions in
the north, in Shaula, meant that Gloria had to keep back her precious stock as
a deterrent to the unforgiving Queen Ellen.
If only Gloria’s father would
return, for however briefly, her plight would surely force him into giving her
the secret of gunpowder or, more precisely, how to obtain the main ingredient –
nitre. Her alchemists had worked long and hard to establish the nature and
proportions of the constituents. Charcoal and sulphur were easily got, but nitre
was proving impossible. Every time she greeted a returning expedition on the
banks of the Sanin the answer was always the same, and she was now of the firm
opinion that nitre simply did not exist in her world; rather, it could only be
manufactured by some invention her father had discovered in the mysterious
world in which he had chosen to hide.
But time was pressing now. The
terrorists of the east could not be defeated unless they were to be wasted with
the very deterrent to Shaula. And if the Queen of that icy realm ever found out
that Gloria had no capacity to make more gunpowder then Mizar would be at the
mercy of her ravaging hoards. That was why the latest overture from Queen
Ellen, laden as it was with deceit and danger, would have to be considered.
That, however, would only postpone the inevitable. The best way would be for
her father to return with the means of dealing with the mess he’d created.
Some, even in her own elite, said Morgan was dead, but in her heart Gloria knew
differently. If only she could draw him home. A gentle knock on the door broke
her thoughts.
A long excerpt. However Gloria is not only looking for an answer to these problems but also is searching for love. She finds it in a most unlikely place.
Best wishes Saul.
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